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--- stolen_land:the_east_sellen_river [2020/05/23 10:44] – created johnb
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 **Embeth Forest** lies in a low-lying area featuring stagnant marshes and low hills. The land does not support farming of any sort and the marshy forest is filled with spiteful sprites and dangerous animals.
-South of Embeth The River just grazes the northeast tip of  **Hymbria** – another thick forest area patrolled by Elves.  Visitors are not welcome.
+South of Embeth The River just grazes the north east tip of  **Hymbria** – another thick forest area patrolled by Elves.  Visitors are not welcome.
-On the opposite side of the river is **Fort Liberthane.**  This small heavily fortified village is the base for a fanatical movement dedicated to dedicated to free the state of Galt, and is under the control of a Paladin.  It is (about) two hundred miles south of Mivon, and is (perhaps)  the first safe place for trading vessels to stop for trade.
+On the opposite side of the river is **Fort Liberthane.**  This small heavily fortified village is the base for a fanatical movement dedicated to freeing the state of Galt. It is under the control of a Paladin.  It is (about) two hundred miles south of Mivon, and is (perhaps)  the first safe place for trading vessels to stop for trade.
-The River runs alongside the Southwest edge of **Galt** itself -  a nation that has been undder the rule of a revolutionary Committee for about 50 years – smaller revolutions change the committee regularly.  Most nobles and the wealthy have either been exiled or executed.
+The River runs alongside the Southwest edge of **Galt** itself -  a nation that has been under the rule of a revolutionary Committee for about 50 years – smaller revolutions change the committee regularly.  Most nobles and the wealthy have either been exiled or executed.
-Another 200 miles downstream from Fort Libertane you come to Lake Kallas and its only settlement,** Riverton**.  Riverton is a simple village run as Theocracy by a man called the river preacher, who labels himself as Hanspur’s chosen.
+Another 200 miles downstream from Fort Libertane you come to Lake Kallas and its only settlement,** Riverton**.  Riverton is a simple village run as Theocracy by a man called The River Preacher, who labels himself as Hanspur’s chosen.
-**Lake Kallas** itself is fed by a number of tributaries – including the Sellen Itself, which continues on  south towards Taldor, Arodan and the Inner Sea.
+**Lake Kallas** itself is fed by a number of tributaries – including the Sellen and East Sellen, The river continues  south towards Taldor, Arodan and the Inner Sea.