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 ====== In the beginning …. ====== ====== In the beginning …. ======
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   * The sun, the moon and the barren earth    * The sun, the moon and the barren earth 
   * Huddled quiet, and were our birth   * Huddled quiet, and were our birth
   * Sol, the hot and hungry parent   * Sol, the hot and hungry parent
-  * Beaming like  an angry tyrant+  * Beaming like an angry tyrant
   * Lune the gentle, glowing sister   * Lune the gentle, glowing sister
   * Speaking softly, in a whisper   * Speaking softly, in a whisper
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   * longing for a son and daughter.   * longing for a son and daughter.
   * -   * -
-  * Sol, inflamed by mother Gaya+  * Sol, inflamed by Mother Gaya
   * fast became a strange messiah   * fast became a strange messiah
   * Scorching land and boiling sea   * Scorching land and boiling sea
   * bought cloud and wind, as you can see.   * bought cloud and wind, as you can see.
-  * These children of the heavenly pair, +  * The children of this heavenly pair, 
-  * greened the land and made it fare.+  * greened the land and made it fair.
   * Plants and fish, the wolf and ox   * Plants and fish, the wolf and ox
   * Scattered cross the pools and rocks.   * Scattered cross the pools and rocks.
   * -   * -
   * Then we came to reap this plenty   * Then we came to reap this plenty
-  * spreading cross the land, half empty+  * spread across the land, half empty
   * Sons and daughters, Gaya’s offspring   * Sons and daughters, Gaya’s offspring
   * hunting game with spear and sling.   * hunting game with spear and sling.
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   * Gaya’s gifts are multiple   * Gaya’s gifts are multiple
   * And help us keep our stomachs full   * And help us keep our stomachs full
-  * First a dream of wolfpacks chase+  * First a dream of wolfpack'chase
   * made tribal hunting commonplace.   * made tribal hunting commonplace.
   * She followed that with spiders’ web   * She followed that with spiders’ web
-  * gave nets across the river’s ebb.+  * to give us nets 'cross the river’s ebb.
   * The final dream of squirrel wits   * The final dream of squirrel wits
   * led to building storage pits.   * led to building storage pits.
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   * Rotted fruit and drunken deer   * Rotted fruit and drunken deer
   * showed the way to berry-beer.   * showed the way to berry-beer.
-  * Soon the evening passed quite merry+  * Soon the evenings passed quite merry
   * Thanks to drum and happy berry.   * Thanks to drum and happy berry.
   * -   * -
-  * Give you thanks to all three lords,+  * Give your thanks to all three lords,
   * Mentor of us human hordes.   * Mentor of us human hordes.
   * Treat their gifts with great respect,     * Treat their gifts with great respect,  
-  * Lest their world-gift should be wrecked.+  * or this world will soon be wrecked.
   * Take your needs and leave the rest,   * Take your needs and leave the rest,
   * let our world be loved and blessed.   * let our world be loved and blessed.
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