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--- consolidated:neighbours:dwarf_mineholds [2025/07/29 15:02] – johnb
+++ consolidated:neighbours:dwarf_mineholds [2025/08/22 12:31] (current) – johnb
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   * [[consolidated:easttelida:holden#belarum|Belarum]] - a small mine-hold in [[consolidated:easttelida:holden|Holden]], [[consolidated:easttelida:start|East Telida,]]. This is a poor minehold, with limited supplies of iron.
   * **Rockhome** - on the road between Sybarite and Jekleal, in the Far Coast States.
-  * **Deep Delve** - a Dwarf Mine-hold deep in the Rostil Mountains, North of The Strongholds.
   * **Dersolbek** – set in the eastern mountains of Urgon.
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   * **__These mine-holds are Followers of Torag__**
   * These Minehold generally have connections to the underdark
-  * **[[..:..:neighbours:melmond|Melmond]]** - High up in the Telidan mountain range, Melmond sends shipments of ingots to The Tannery, via Berhof - a journey of several weeks through dangerous terrain.  Technically, the Minehold is known as Holfuruhm, but most people just call it Melmond.  (The Dwarves find it amusing, as  Melmond is a corruption of Bad Land / Bad World in an old language)  This is a Great Mine-hold with links to the underdark.
+  * **[[melmond|Melmond]]** - High up in the Telidan mountain range, Melmond sends shipments of ingots to The Tannery, via Berhof - a journey of several weeks through dangerous terrain.  Technically, the Minehold is known as Holfuruhm, but most people just call it Melmond.  (The Dwarves find it amusing, as  Melmond is a corruption of Bad Land / Bad World in an old language)  This is a Great Mine-hold with links to the underdark.
   * **Deep Delve** - a Dwarf Mine-hold deep in the Rostil Mountains, North of The Strongholds.
   * -
   * **__These mine-holds are Followers of Magrim__**
-  * These mines have often lost their cionnection to the underdark, for some reason.
+  * Many of hese mines have often lost their connection to the underdark, or suffered some other great trauma.
   * **[[consolidated:hann_empire:porter_s_bar:start#banaduum|Banaduum]]** - a poor mine-hold close to Porters Bar, without a link to the underdark.  This is a poor minehold, with limited supplies of iron.
   * **Unknown** - the mine-hold at Paria in Drai Shon, which hasn't yet been named yet.  It might be an exceptiuon, and still retain an underdark link.
   * **Farfobik** - A small Mine-hold in Galina, close to the coast, without a link to the underdark.  This is a poor minehold.